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NATIVE
By Christopher Alan Maloney

GENRE: Thriller, Horror
LOGLINE:

A Native American, out of touch with his roots, moves back to a tribal area where he is forced to defend his family from a legendary creature.

NATIVE

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Maurice Vaughan

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