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Ágata is a teenager who chooses never to leave her hyper-connected room again. Her friend Zoe shares the thrills of her life through her cellphone camera. Ágata’s father tries everything he can to pull her out of her confinement.
SYNOPSIS:
Ágata, a teenager who feels that life outdoors is hostile, chooses never to leave her room again. Her hyper-connection to the Internet allows her to have an open window to a virtual world.
Meanwhile, her friend Zoe shares the thrills of her life through her cellphone camera. Ágata’s father tries everything he can to pull her out of her confinement until, tired of his unsuccessful struggle, leaves her to confront her survival instinct.
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Hi Amaia, this premise is really interesting! For your logline, try your best to condense it into one or two sentences at the most. One of the easiest ways to do this is starting with "After" or "When." For example, "After a teenager decides never to leave her room again, instead living vicariously through her friends' cellphone camera, her father tries everything he can to pull her out of her confinement."