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Onil, a young man, loves Oana, his girlfriend, and wants to make her marriage proposal to the old bell tower at sunset. On the way to the bell tower, they are struck by lightning and, not realizing anything, and they pass into the other world, the world where souls leave after death. The other world is eternal, vast, and incomprehensible to them and in it there is not only paradise and hell but also much more. Oana goes to hell for some unknown reason, and the Onil goes to paradise. Onil is not ready to face this because, for him, paradise cannot exist without his beloved. He begins to seek God in heaven to forgive Oana and free her from hell. But he can’t find God. He decides to go to hell to help Oana somehow or stay with her. However, everything turned out to be not so simple. With his strange desire to leave heaven and go to hell for the sake of love, he divided everyone in the new world into those who believe in love and are ready to help him and those who do not believe and want to prevent him. His decision brings him to the center of this world full of secrets, intrigues, disputes, and conflicts, where’s an eternal war between angels, demons, and all those who already are in that world.
Whether he will be able to reach and find his love and help her, only God knows, but in this story he has his own interests and they are completely different.
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This is more like a synopsis than a logline but the story is interesting and you can write a stunning visual effect in the other worlds. Good Luck!
Thank you Pattana, yes Logline is as long as the story itself. 3 volumes of 600 pages, this is still a book, will be released next year (1 volume). I haven't gotten to the script yet, that's why I'm here
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