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WHY ARE THEY RUNNING?
By Eddy Gun
Evil thinks its reign is absolute...It hasn't met Slayon Colby yet!
SYNOPSIS:
On D'earth in the city of Axemere, a student witnesses the murder of an innocent bystander. She is under the assumption that the murderer did not see her. Much to her surprise when the he does show up at her house, she and her friends have no choice but to confront him...HARD!
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Hey Eddy Gun - I would consider a more complete logline with a goal for the protagonist and stakes. Here's the template that I use: “After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role) tries to _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”