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TO FEEL SOMETHING (SHORT SCREENPLAY)
By Tracey Flynn

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: A woman in a psychiatric clinic asks her estranged sister to help her commit suicide after she’s failed in sixteen years to find forgiveness for murdering their mother.

SYNOPSIS:

MIRIAM (32), a suicidal mental health patient burdened by extreme guilt, writes AGAIN to her kind-hearted, but estranged sister, VALERIE (30) Their relationship has always been strained. When their mother’s huntington’s confined her to a wheelchair, it was sixteen-year-old Miriam who was forced to give up her life to care for her, while younger sister, gifted musician, Valerie, sought her dreams. Miriam became so aware of her exclusion from life and love that she was driven to extreme measures to break the numbness. Now, sixteen years on, unable to accept her actions, Miriam lures Valerie into visiting her with a request to bring a concealed blade. Told in a double narrative flashback form, this story was inspired by a true account of a severely depressed girl who killed her neighbour’s daughter in order “to feel something”.

Charles Symons

Hiya Tracy, thanks for the invite...did you make this?

Tracey Flynn

Hi Charles! Sorry, only just saw your message. No, it's just in screenplay form right now.

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