Rudi O'Meara, The unlikely alliance between an American mountaineer and a German ski soldier offers a strong emotional hook and the potential for powerful character dynamics. The phrase “one of the most spectacular raids in all of military history” lends a sense of grandeur and urgency, while “inspired by true events” adds credibility and gravitas. To make it even tighter, you could slightly trim the opening for momentum (e.g., “To break through Hitler’s Gothic Line…”), but overall, this is a compelling and high-impact war drama setup.