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THE PRINCESS OF MAGPIES
By Mark Jordan
When a clever but disregarded renaissance princess, trapped by societal norms, discovers a plot to overthrow her father, she convinces her disgraced uncle to train a secret order of all-female knights – The Magpies – to defend her kingdom. Think of MULAN meets THE MAGNIFICENT SEVEN in Renaissance Italy.
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Needs a little polish maybe? Just workshopping this .... maybe... "After learning of a plot to usurp her father's crown, a jaded, caged-in Italian princess convinces her disgraced warrior uncle to train her and a group of friends so they can form an order of all-female knights, called The Magpies, to defend the realm." I'm not sure "fifteenth-century" is necessary if you mention things like, king, kingdom, crown, princess, knights, etc. That can be in the synopsis maybe...