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Annie, a struggling actress trying to get into the industry, begins killing other actresses to improve her chances of getting her big break.
SYNOPSIS:
ACT 1:
Status Quo: Our world, modern day
Who: Annie, trying to make it as an actress, going to audition after audition, but finding no success.
Need: love - Annie wants to be loved and adored by the masses
Want: success
The Problem: Annie loses out on every role she auditions for.
Thrust to 2: Annie kills another woman competing with her for an audition
ACT 2:
Upside-down world: Annie is determined to find fame and success by any means necessary and begins killing all of her competition to do it.
The new problem: Police and Producers become suspicious of the many accidents happening to other actresses in the community and begin to suspect Annie.
Rising Obstacles: With every body she drops the police piece more together. The walls begin to close around Annie.
False defeat: The executive producer shuts down production on the film she has been hired on to and Annie feels she is losing her one shot at success.
Thrust to 3: Annie is crazed and frantic and decides to go after the producer to try and get the film back on track.
ACT 3:
Storming the castle: Annie breaks into the producer's home.
Battle: Annie tries to threaten the producer’s life to get him to restart production on the film.
Loss: The cops find Annie and leave her with no options. Annie kills herself to prevent being arrested.
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