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When a falling star becomes human and enters the life of the warrior, Taran, he must choose between being the hand of evil and following his heart to risk everything he has ever known to defend innocence. Will the sacrifice be enough for redemption?
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I like it. :) I like the logline, the premise, the screenplay could do with a little tightening, but it's damn good.
Thanks Nathaniel and Stefano! Great encouragement!
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Thank you, Tasha!
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Thank you, Jessica!
Thank you, Grzegorz!
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Original concept with a familiar structure (the choice between "evil" and "good but hard"), sounds promising.