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DROPPED UP!

DROPPED UP!
By Devin O'Neill

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

When a fallen NFL quarterback takes a neglected foster child under his arm, he must outshine the shame of his prior failure to tackle his true purpose.

Angela Cristantello

So so so fun, Devin! I wonder if something like "disgraced" as opposed to "downtrodden" might be a more appropriate adjective here (it would certainly up the stakes considerably more).

I love this, though!

Nate Rymer

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Nathaniel Baker

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Devin O'Neill

Thanks so much for taking the time to take a look at my logline Angela, Nate, and Nathanial. I have made a few more tweaks.

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