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An old hermitic actor and his best friend’s ghost embark on a re-coming-of-age journey to recover seven arrows he shot off his rooftop during a failed suicide attempt.
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After not leaving his house for 2 years, old, hermitic actor, the famous Oliver Winslow, must embark on a re-coming-of-age journey with the ghost of his best friend (Peter Marwood) in order to recover the 7 arrows he shot into the city from his rooftop the night before during a drug-induced suicide attempt. He meets Ava, a young talented actress struggling to get by on a waitress job, and doing local plays, for now. The two are drawn together after a bumpy beginning, each illuminating each others world views. Through this dark, yet whimsical, adventure filled with ghost police, naked bike rides, riding on top of food carts, dodging investigative reporters, breaking priceless works of art, and a sword made of melted down oscars, Peter, Ava, and Oliver discover more about life (and death) than they ever knew before. Oliver doesn't think the world needs him anymore... but what can you do if you're dead?
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what does the arrow have to do with the story? Also, what do the arrows have to do with the suicide attempt - reorganizing the logline would be better as if I have questions then others might not even ask and just pass you over
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