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BLOOD RIVER
By Nadir Akhmerov
In 1925, in the swamps of Florida, a farmer protects his family and the lives of others, trying to catch and kill a giant man-eating alligator.
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good first try, maybe research what it is and try again - a logline is like a hook! 25 words or less best of luck https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline
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I disagree with Kacee. I think you have a good hook with this logline, it just needs better structure to flow a little smoother.
Thank you Frank!
Nadir Akhmerov How are you making this different than all the other Alligator movies out there with the very same concept????
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