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By Joseph Duke
In a series of humorous situations, a compulsive gambler must strive to overcome his addiction and recover squandered funds.
SYNOPSIS:
Financial gain and social status is necessary for Akin; a compulsive gambler, who strives to recover lost funds in a sequence of humorous situations. However, he discovers that his habits are getting in the way of his sister's wedding and Financial Dream.
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Your logline's almost there, Joseph Duke. I think it needs the stakes (what happens if he doesn't overcome his addiction and recover the squandered funds).
"In a series of humorous situations, a compulsive gambler strives to overcome his addiction and recover squandered funds __________ (the stakes)."
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I just read the synopsis, Joseph Duke. I think these are the stakes: "However, he discovers that his habits are getting in the way of his sister's wedding and Financial Dream."
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Hi Maurice thank you so much for your observation, and im glad you found the stakes in the synopsis.
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You're welcome, Joseph Duke.
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