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PERENNIALS (SHORT)
By Donald Lewis
Paranoia takes root when a White suburban woman repeatedly receives business cards from a Mexican landscaper through her front door mail slot, sending her on a frantic mission to stop the invasion of her home.
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Hi Donald! Pretty clear logline until the "invasion" part. I can't tell if the character is racist and perceiving some sort of invasion (because you specified ethnicity it could imply that), or if there's a literal invasion happening, or if the invasion is referring to the business cards. So totally following it until that last part starting with "sending" which I think just needs to be more specific and clear.
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