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By Teneille Newallo
In 1498 Trinidad, a mysterious, lurking shadow spooks an Amerindian village, inspiring their fearless princess to go out in search of the truth behind the disappearance of her husband but she soon discovers it's much more complicated than she thought.
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It's a strong outline, with a detailed conflict. My only note would be to break up the sentence structure on "...but soon she discovers..." It feels like a run-on sentence. Otherwise, it's a great concept!
Thank you for the feedback James, really appreciate it!
You're welcome, I'm happy to help!