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Unconventional, cutting edge, inspired and different. An unbelievable tale of true life trails including suicide, spiritual transformation and a healing work including the clearing of entities and the paranoia.
SYNOPSIS:
Born in 1951, Marion has had an extra ordinary life. In a short space of time she has experienced events that have fast-tracked her spiritual understanding and personal growth. She has shared these events with you to show how she coped, with the hope that what she learnt will help you as well.
Raised on a back-country farm in New Zealand she had a traumatic life that left her with emotional problems, which created an unruly teenager with little or no self-love or respect for herself, and a marriage that only made this worse, leading to dark days and an attempted suicide.
However, life had greater plans for Marion and she was set firmly on a path of spiritual discovery, fast-tracked through the tough times, and lessons that taught her there was much more to life than one can consciously see and hear. Her healing abilities and spiritual understanding flourished as her spirit guides taught her how to heal and most importantly, to understand possession and entities and how this is so prevalent yet feared in our society. Marion’s journey is one of enlightenment and awakening.
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sounds more like an essay than a movie
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May I say something — Normally Logline is in this format so it will grab attention.
When [INCITING INCIDENT] happens, [OUR PROTAGONIST] decides [TO DO ACTION] against [ANTAGONIST -an inner spiritual blockade.] it may help.
Your concept sounds very interesting like fantasy and spiritual - the “awakening”. Thus maybe you’ll like my script Buddha’s Shadow. It’s about enlightenment or awakening.
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I’ve read the book you sent. It’s an interesting story. It can adapt into a movie with many visual such dyslexic, swinging. You ought to write it by yourself because no one can feel the emotion like the author. Best of luck!
Thanks Pattana will take that on board