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When a straight-laced high school senior finally cuts loose on Christmas Eve, a wild night takes a chaotic turn-leaving him and his friends lost in the city, stoned, broke, and racing against the clock to make it home in time for midnight mass!
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High school overachiever Jag Matthews, who's been trading fun for straight A's his whole life, is about to hit the ultimate academic 'speed bump'—the wild Christmas Eve bash thrown by his longtime crush, Syler Boggs, who is now single and ready to mingle. With some epic arm-twisting from his partner-in-crime Nolan, Jag musters up the guts to plead for party permission from his strict and overprotective parents, but there's a catch: they insist he make it to Midnight Mass. Game on!
Jag and Nolan show up at Syler's party absurdly early, where Jag plays party assistant and Nolan's idea of blending in is making himself obnoxiously at home. Before the festivities kick off, Syler livestreams herself and Jag getting the party started, which spirals her meathead ex Carter Hall into a jealous rage. Carter and his buddies crash the party with a plan to trick Jag, Nolan, and even Syler into indulging in some marijuana edibles. But what they didn't expect was Syler's appetite for adventure, as she joins the unintentionally stoned trio in their hazy journey through the city. Stranded in the concrete jungle with no cash, no phones, and minds drifting through uncharted realms, Jag, Nolan, and Syler navigate a wild and hilarious quest to make it back in time for Midnight Mass. Will they beat the clock and get to church or will Jag's first taste of rebellion turn into a Christmas catastrophe that he won't soon forget?
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Great title and fun concept, Scott Morse! I suggest taking out "Jag Matthews" and just having "a straight-laced high school senior." Other than that, solid logline.
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Thank you Maurice! I greatly appreciate the feedback.
You're welcome, Scott Morse.
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Again brilliant title and great concept!