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BROKEN BOY
By Ahi Black
A seven year old boy named Jack follows the stories read to him by his grandfather as a guide to his freedom from his abusive world.
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I would suggest rewording " a seven year old boy named Jack" to "Seven year old Jack". Hope that helps!
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