Your story is great! I love Christmas stories and I can't wait to see this on Hallmark. My only suggestion is, you may want to take the names out. One of the logline rules is not to use names. Your theme is really clever. I like your antagonist, the $100,000 prize money. It's forcing them to make some important decisions. Great ob!
Your story is great! I love Christmas stories and I can't wait to see this on Hallmark. My only suggestion is, you may want to take the names out. One of the logline rules is not to use names. Your theme is really clever. I like your antagonist, the $100,000 prize money. It's forcing them to make some important decisions. Great ob!
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