THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES

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THE CANTEEN NOTES
By Molly Kerr

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: A twelve year old girl starts proceedings to divorce her loving, alcoholic mother and criminal step-father but can she cope with the guilt of abandoning her vulnerable brothers and live with the ultimate fallout five years later?
Danny Lambert

Is it a short? Where's the screenplay? would love to have a look.

Molly Kerr
@Danny Lambert

It's a feature that I'm still writing, unfortunately. But I am reading a book that focusses on loglines (Story Line by Jen Grisanti- it is so great and helpful) and so I'm practicing writing them because it helps with the structure of the script. Also it's less overwhelming to get feedback on something malleable like a logline and then apply it to the structure of the script than get a lot of feedback on the script and synopsis which then makes me feel like a failure! Because I'm good with criticism that way. :P

Danny Lambert
@Danny Lambert

That makes alot of sense. I'm gonna try it

Curt Butler
@Danny Lambert

... same with this logline! ... suggest you also consider posting your scrips, so as, other can read. Kind Regards, Curt

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