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CANOE + PADDLE ; QUEEN KAPI'OLANI'S GIFT OF AROHA
By Zak Shimose

GENRE: Period Piece, Documentary
LOGLINE:

2 canoes gifted by Hawai'i's Queen (2 years prior to the overthrow of the Hawaiian Monarchy) to the Smithsonian Museum and England in 1891, and the connection to a modern day (and the last) master Hawaiian canoe carver, despite the fact that 2 canoes are housed in storage facilities.

Zak Shimose

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Zak Shimose

too wordy, too much parenthesis. good foundation.

Pattana Thaivanich

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Pattana Thaivanich

But it's an interesting story!

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