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2 canoes gifted by Hawai'i's Queen (2 years prior to the overthrow of the Hawaiian Monarchy) to the Smithsonian Museum and England in 1891, and the connection to a modern day (and the last) master Hawaiian canoe carver, despite the fact that 2 canoes are housed in storage facilities.
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But it's an interesting story!