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The girl finds a teddy bear who becomes her defender in the fight against mysterious monsters living in her house.
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Hello Gennadii, very good concept, just a little suggestion, use the verb "becomes" in present tense, same as "finds".
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You're welcome, Gennadii.
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Hello Gennadii, very good concept, just a little suggestion, use the verb "becomes" in present tense, same as "finds".
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Marcos Fizzotti Thanks!
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You're welcome, Gennadii.
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