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SIRENS
By Garonski Gennadii
In the lawless anarchy of a collapsed Russia, two Ukrainian sisters hunt down the war criminals on their hit list to execute a personal tribunal against the sadistic commander who brutally murdered their parents and left them for dead.
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Great revenge plot idea but feel a bit more detail is needed in terms of stakes and who specifically they are hunting.
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L. Tom Deaver Very good note, thank you!
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