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2 men in the interior of a car (Chase Protagonist, Karl Team Lead) Chase is the agent and meeting with his team leader Karl in the back of a limo Karl is expressing the severity of the night and how they must be discreet Karl mentions that the US government is open to contracting out the team for their services Chase expresses he has a bad feeling about the night Chase get's out of the car and goes into the business A team of 4 men are loading stolen goods into the back of a truck The Boss Leader, Heavy is surveying the operation talks to an assistant Kim Kim goes inside to check up on the interior operation, a computer hacker is working into the systems. Chase is working his way through the building surveying Chase finds a room with another person who he sneaks up on, only to find out it's Natalie, a team mate is there. Chase wasn't expecting her. Natalie says she's been checking in on active operations since she's seen strange things lately Chase and Natalie begin making their way toward the criminals They locate the computer hacker and Chase sneaks up on him and takes him out by hand Natalie sits at the computer to figure out what's happening Natalie learns that they are hacking into other businesses from within this company Kim, evil woman, walks into the room and Chase grabs her. Chase calls for Natalie and she walks up and punches Kim. Natalie says, still not punching women? Chase, only when I have to. Heavy get's a call that he has visitors, he motions to his men and they enter the building. Chase sees the men coming, Natalie says she got in from the roof. Chase and Natalie head for the roof Heavy is close behind and sees the computer hacker and Kim knocked out on the ground. They ascend the stairs in pursuit. Chase and Natalie make it to the roof and position themselves for a show down. As Heavy and crew make it to the roof Chase and Natalie open fire. Heavy takes cover and watches his men get demolished. Chase walks up to survey the carnage and Heavy appears and attacks him. Natalie is carefully aiming to ensure not to hit Chase. She fires and we watch the bullet graze by Chase and hit heavy. Chase is a little offended that Natalie didn't give him another minute. Just then Karl shows up and electrically shocks Chase to the ground. Two men appear behind Natalie and knock the gun out of her hands. Chase is confused, asks why he would betray them Karl says that the commissions for the work aren't worth the costs Karl challenges that they are replaceable and just drones holdings guns Karl says that he has to make his own returns and that Chase is too moral to join Karl says that he'll have no problem framing him since he killed a cop Karl grabs a badge from Heavy to the surprise of Chase Karl declares that he runs this town now and orders that Natalie be thrown from the roof Chase is stunned and breaks loose from his captors He rolls for his gun and shoots Karl and the two men escorting Natalie He has one bullet left and runs for the last two shooting one and then disabling the other. Chase runs for Natalie as the sun rises. Chase asks Natalie to breakfast