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Three professional women tackle the adventures of Adulting-While-Black with sisterhood and a lot of weed.
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Harriet, Cheyenne, and Prudence are three best friends who met while in college in South Georgia. Now in their mid-thirties, being an adult means no more super late nights during business days in the club or spending your last on a dimebag split three ways (ha...brokies). You become intentional with spending quality time with some of the people that matter most...your girls.
Successful, purposed, and Black, the three women blow off steam with their favorite pastime - a good ole blunt (sometimes 3)! Life can be fun but it can also be a lot. Those “a lot” moments can be overwhelming and the compassionate perspective of your homegirls are more therapeutic than the countless blunts these women have shared.
They understand how hard it can be to be Black and woman in a world that tries to pretend they bring no value.
Let’s clear the air.
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Hi Amber! Great start, the logline just needs some more info, and less punctuation as this isn't like a poster or an ad/tagline. Loglines are meant to be more clinical. Try this formula out: When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS], a [SPECIFIC PROTAGONIST] must [OBJECTIVE],or else [STAKES].
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Reminds me a bit of Insecure's Self Care Sunday <3
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I was lost after page three.
@Tim where did I lose you?
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Amber. I get this part being an adult means no more super late nights during business days in the club or spending your last on a dimebag split three ways. You become intentional with spending quality time with some of the people that matter most...your girls. I did not get how they went from wanting to change to wanting to murder someone, unless they were just speaking outloud
They're high and their friend is so anal they refer to her as Dexter.
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