Hi Antonella! I'm following it but then you lose me at "doing la vida Loca" because I don't know what that means aside from the Ricky Martin song. And then "but a stolen phone triggers a series of frustrating events" isn't specific enough. Basic logline formula is: When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS], a [SPECIFIC PROTAGONIST] must [OBJECTIVE],or else [STAKES].

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on it right now!