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"When a down-and-out performing flying squirrel escapes from an exotic pet seller, he discovers a hidden part of the ancient hardwood forests in Eastern North America, where he uncovers his skills as a superpower to help his newfound friends save their home."
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Animated Action-Adventure
Spencer is a Carolina flying squirrel. Which is a big thing in the Hollow as no squirrel had ever flow before.
His life goal is to return to his home in Carolina.
His series goal is to help out his friends mediate the world between an ancient forest's critters and encroaching urbanization.
Spencer escapes a future as an exotic pet and performer and finds a home in a community around the Special World of the One Tree. A single black oak tree from the old forest in the middle of a horse pasture.
Spencer tries to fit in among the Wild Wood's storied characters and help them meet the future.
Read the first ten pages.
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I like the logline, I think it should be more like a fantasy-science fiction world-building where the alien-human hybrids are pet owners while the other characters who lives in Eastern North America should be bipedal anthropomorphic animals. It could give more intriguingness to the younger audiences but give it more heart, humor, and adventure. Think about it, Shawn Jackson.
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Chase Carmichael Interesting suggestions, but then it would be your story and not mine. I am confident in my characters and story arc. I believe the script's simple and direct structure will appeal to both family viewers and production executives.
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Shawn Jackson. Seems totally true. If you're confident, then I'll get out of your way then. Keep up the good work.
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I really love the idea! It definitely has some potential.
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