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The fallen angel, Lucifer, learns of God’s plan to create a new world and inhabit it with a creature called Man - a creature that Lucifer will claim for himself.
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Lucifer was once the most respected archangel in heaven, but his own vain desire to elevate himself resulted in his being banished. From hell, he plots his revenge against God and the citizens of Heaven—including his kin Gabriel and Michael. As chance would have it, before his exile from Heaven, Lucifer learns of a plan to create a new world and inhabit it with a new race. Fueled by his desire for revenge, Lucifer’s quest from hell is to destroy this new creation and wage war on his former homeland.
Claim to Asylum is the story about Adam and Eve; how they came to be created and how they came to lose their place in the Garden of Eden, also called Paradise. This action packed series tells the true story of the war that transgressed time - It is a story of the origins of the immortal, shapeshifting, supernatural being, known as Satan.
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