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Allen JR
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"MINDBOGLER"
By Allen JR

GENRE: Science Fiction, Adventure

LOGLINE: After a particle beam accident gives a teenage hip-hop artist the power to travel through digital screens, he rises to viral fame before secretly fighting crime in both reality and the digital worlds beyond it.

SYNOPSIS:

Spiderman, Quantum Leap, Mighty Max, & Max Headroom

"MINDBOGLER"

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Nate Rymer

4 years ago

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Allen JR

4 years ago

Thank you!!

Tasha Lewis 2

4 years ago

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Allen JR

4 years ago

Hello I refixed my punctuation of the Protagonist! Checkout the trailer:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CA7L5CmL58

Theme song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6p3SooyEZAo

Gen Vardo

4 years ago

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Gen Vardo

4 years ago

MINDBOGLER. I love the name, real super hero title that could fit in with the darker side of comic book culture.

I would suggest looking at 2000AD comic book style storytelling. I'm sure you'll find alot to expand on.

Good luck :)

Allen JR

4 years ago

Hey! I've been taken three pitch sessions on this. Its extraordinary how I realize that I had to be confidence to break the concept down and answering unexpected questions. Interesting to know. Thank you for that suggestion, but I only do short and film scripts in related to this character.