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Javiron Thompson
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HANGMAN'S GAUNTLET
By Javiron Thompson

GENRE: Western, Horror

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When a protective sister escorts her kid brother to a gun competition in the old west, they must fight to survive an advanced parasite turning the townsfolk into twisted monsters.

HANGMAN'S GAUNTLET

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Maurice Vaughan

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- Matthew Parvin
- Javiron Thompson
3 years ago

Sounds like an exciting Western Horror, Javiron Thompson. My only suggestion is change "must survive" to "try to survive" (or "fight to survive"). “Must” sounds like the characters are forced to do the story goal (survive) instead of them doing it willingly, and “must” doesn’t sound active.