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EXPIRATION DATE
By Stan Evans
In a near future where AI predicts death dates, a cynical comedy writer falls for a woman who shortens his lifespan. As his countdown accelerates, he must choose: love or survival.
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EXPIRATION DATE is unique, @Stan! Perfect title. How does falling for the woman shorten his lifespan/tie into the AI predicting death dates? I think explaining that in your logline will make it stronger.
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Thanks but a little mystery is good in a logline lol.
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You're welcome, Stan Evans. You're right. And it says you're a writer-producer on your profile, so if you're making the movie yourself, you can hold back things in a logline more than if you were a writer pitching to a producer. I'm excited to watch this! Congratulations on winning the Emmy and all your success!
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Thank you sir!
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You're welcome, Stan Evans.