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THE PACIFIC AFFAIR
By Gary Stephenson
We live in a world in crisis. A world where greed turns the wheels of state.
SYNOPSIS:
We live in a world in crisis. A world where greed turns the wheels
of state. A world where environmental concerns take a back seat to
the vast machine of global commerce. Billionaire ecophilanthropist
Charles Langham is determined to change that.
Langham implores the United Nations General Assembly to take a
more active role in combating famine and the deforestation of rain
forests, reversing extinction rates, and promoting alternative
fuels.
But this environmental plea has teeth
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Hey Gary, love the theme and that teaser "this environmental plea has teeth", you want to include the protagonist in the logline, the inciting incident and the stakes. It's currently reading more like a tagline.