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When one of them unwittingly breaks a horror movie killing rule, four horror movie killer roommates taking part in a documentary have one night to fix a broken curse or face torture for eternity.
SYNOPSIS:
Four horror killer roommates are forced on the run after their boss - a pushy porcelain doll - orders a bounty on their heads after one of them breaks a sacred horror movie killing rule, snapping their killing curse over the town and switching the horror movie killers from the hunters to the hunted. The four killers embark on a dangerous mission to get a new curse from the devil. The problem? The portal to summon the devil is at their boss's house... on the other side of town. Racing against the clock, the four killers must dodge their fellow horror movie killers and the pissed off towns people on their quest for a new curse.
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Hi Nolan, this is a cool concept. I think the logline is a bit confusing because its introducing the reader to a whole new world. To set up the rules of your world, you might start the logline off with "In a world where..." I know it's a little cheesy but I think it'll work for this story!
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