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Cortavius Conner Jr. a young African American basketball player find himself in pain when two of the most important people in his life dies. He'll let his life spiral into gang life to get his revenge losing all respect of self-worth and compassion.
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Cortavius (C-Money) Conner Jr. once was a basketball star with a promising future. It seems so long ago as he now sits in his cell on a ragged bunk reading a book. He's in a different world now, those dreams of basketball stardom have faded away after Kaiwon Illwood was killed (Best Friend). My life change with the flash of a gun shoot pointed at Kaiwon . The squeeze of a trigger sending Kaiwon body falling to the cold damp grass. Blood oozing from his chest as young women standing around watching screams as the shooters ran off. Yes! That was a long time ago, so I sit in my cell thinking of what was and how I let my family and myself down with much disappointment. Was I right as I look back at it all? The killing, shooting, stealing, beating, selling drugs, pimping women. Was that me? What did I become? Or was it all a dream? Fuck no, it wasn't. Yes, it was me, doing all those things and more. I deserve to be here. I became a menace to my community and society in general, at times I didn't give a fuck about it.
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