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Four U.S. special forces soldiers awake in a dark cell shackled together. They all know each other, but for how long? They are being tortured to forget their last Mission. Who are you when choices are not your own?
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Great title, Lawrence Whitener!
I think your logline needs some more information.
Something like: "After four Special Forces soldiers wake in a dark cell shackled, they _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
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