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(New SAG short) Four special forces soldiers awake in a dark cell shackled. They all know each other, but for how long? Who are you, when choices are not your own? Script has 5 Awards on IMDb.
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Four soldiers are gassed. They awake shackled in a cell. They are tortured to forget their last mission. By who and why?
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Great title, Lawrence Whitener!
I think your logline needs some more information.
Something like: "After four Special Forces soldiers wake in a dark cell shackled, they _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
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