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Native American Indian Vietnam Vet retired K9 Sheriff redeems through retribution for the right reasons. But before he can save them all, he first has to save himself. Based on true events. 34 Awards on IMDb.
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ANDRÉ DOUGUÈT, American Indian, is known as DOG for his Cajun last name. A Vietnam MWD now retired K9-Sheriff, he has horrible guilt over the loss of his two "Partners." His estranged sister calls for help returning him to his home Bayou only to discover an underground crime ring. Before they beat him he quips,"Don't you know it's better to let a sleeping Dog lie?" The crime lord responds, "Only in a grave."
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