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Cajun American Indian Vietnam Vet MWD Handler is now a retired K9 Sheriff with a drinking problem. Called back to his bayou by estranged sister, "Dog" uncovers an underground crime ring. After they try to kill him, he hides his recovery until he can seek redemption through revenge for all the right reasons. Before he can save them all, he first has to save himself. Based on true events. 34 Awards on IMDb.
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ANDRÉ DOUGUÈT, American Indian, is known as DOG for his Cajun last name. Vietnam MWD now retired K9-Sheriff, he has horrible guilt over the loss of two "Partners." His estranged sister calls for help returning him to his Bayou only to discover an underground crime ring. After they beat and leave him for dead he quips,"Don't you know it's better to let a sleeping Dog lie?" Crime lord responds, "Only in a grave."
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