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ALL FOR REVENGE (A HISTORICAL BASED ON ACTUAL EVENTS)
By Christina Lee Wonnacott
In the 1920s, a confidence man, an oil billionaire, and Heavyweight Champ Jack Dempsey combine forces to fleece the murderous embezzler in charge of a mineral rich Montana town.
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I don't want to say something is wordy because God knows I go on like words are dollars! But perhaps something like "In 1920's Montana, A confidence man, an oil billionaire, and Heavyweight Champ Jack Dempsey combine forces to fleece the criminal businessman (maybe a more intense description of the bad guy?) in charge of a mineral-rich town. (maybe the name of the town?
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