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ALL FOR REVENGE (A HISTORICAL BASED ON ACTUAL EVENTS)
By Christina Lee Wonnacott

GENRE: Historical, Drama
LOGLINE:

In the 1920s, a confidence man, an oil billionaire, and Heavyweight Champ Jack Dempsey combine forces to fleece the murderous embezzler in charge of a mineral rich Montana town. 

SYNOPSIS:

D A Stenard

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D A Stenard

I don't want to say something is wordy because God knows I go on like words are dollars! But perhaps something like "In 1920's Montana, A confidence man, an oil billionaire, and Heavyweight Champ Jack Dempsey combine forces to fleece the criminal businessman (maybe a more intense description of the bad guy?) in charge of a mineral-rich town. (maybe the name of the town?

Christina Lee Wonnacott

Hi D A,

Thank you for reading the "All For Revenge" logline. I appreciate your great advice. I will take your guidance and rewrite the logline. Be well and God bless you.

Nathaniel Baker

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