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KITTY KAT CHEER FORCE-TV PILOT
By Steven Gibson
A Teenage cheerleader joins an alien police force of alien cats to protect Earth from evil alien dogs who want to take it over.
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The series centers on Susan Jolts, a teenage girl who gotten rejected from her high school cheerleading squad. With her hopes of her dreams of joining a cheer squad shattered, her life changes when an intergalactic police force of alien cats land on Earth. She then joins their fight against evil dog aliens who want to take over Earth, and she now has her own cheer squad that can fight evil dog aliens while she tries to keep her alien cat friends a secret and maintaining a normal teenage life.
KITTY KAT CHEER FORCE-TV PILOT
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This premise sounds hilarious Steven Gibson - I would consider clarifying some things. I've pasted a template below that I use. You don't have to use it word-for-word but it does list the elements that are missing from your logline..
“After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role) tries to _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
The looming question is...why do the alien dogs want to take over the Earth?