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This is the TV Pilot version of the feature film script Mickey, Go Boom! Episode 1, "How To Kill A Superhero". Season 1 Logline: When a hired thief accidentally kills a beloved superhero during a robbery gone wrong, he pretends to be him to avoid prison and reunite with the daughter he abandoned years ago.
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Thanks for catching that! Will fix it now
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The premise is great Corey Balbuena and the title is catchy!
Thank you so much, @Leonardo Ramirez 2! I'm glad you like it!
Thank you everyone! I've also added the screenplay, so if anyone decides they wanna check it out, I'd love any notes, feedback, advice or etc!
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Thank you @Nathaniel Baker!