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MICKEY, GO BOOM!

MICKEY, GO BOOM!
By Corey Balbuena

GENRE: Action, Animation
LOGLINE: When the daughter he abandoned comes back to town, a broken down thief agrees to one last job, so he can cut ties with the mob and focus on earning a place in her life - unaware that the target of the robbery is a beloved superhero.

SYNOPSIS:

This is the TV Pilot version of the feature film script Mickey, Go Boom! Episode 1, "How To Kill A Superhero". Season 1 Logline: When a hired thief accidentally kills a beloved superhero during a robbery gone wrong, he pretends to be him to avoid prison and reunite with the daughter he abandoned years ago.

MICKEY, GO BOOM!

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Jon Shallit

Target of is?

Corey Balbuena

Thanks for catching that! Will fix it now

Marcos Fizzotti

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Leonardo Ramirez 2

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Leonardo Ramirez 2

The premise is great Corey Balbuena and the title is catchy!

Corey Balbuena

Thank you so much, @Leonardo Ramirez 2! I'm glad you like it!

Corey Balbuena

Thank you everyone! I've also added the screenplay, so if anyone decides they wanna check it out, I'd love any notes, feedback, advice or etc!

Muhammad Abed Baryal

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Nathaniel Baker

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Corey Balbuena

Thank you @Nathaniel Baker!

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