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FURY
By Christiane Lange
A young couple run aground on a tiny island, where they encounter a mute woman, her autistic son, and a flock of goats. Not everyone makes it out alive.
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I like that the story takes place on a tiny Greek island, Christiane Lange. I think that's gonna set it apart from other Horror scripts.
I think your logline needs some work. What's the story goal and stakes?
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Goats are in a HERD, not a flock. Birds are in flocks.
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