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They stole from the mother of a crime lord. If they don't return it fast, they'll be 'moving' permanently.
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Derrick and Rani: professional movers, part-time thieves, and full-time chaos magnets. Their business model is simple—show up in a moving ruck, flash a smile, and 'accidentally' leave with a few high-value extras. It's foolproof. Until they rob the wrong old lady.
Turns out, their latest target isn't just any sweet, unsuspecting widow—she's the mother of Atlanta's most terrifying mob boss. And now he's a little upset. The kind of upset that comes with hired goons, speeding bullets, and a deep desire to see Derrick and Rani buried under more than just moving boxes.
With every gangster in the city closing in, our not-so-master-criminals have two choices: outsmart the mob, outrun the law, and somehow survive—or start pricing caskets.
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This has crazy potential... Comedy is in and so are middle-aged women! Go for it!
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