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After a confrontation with the Eastern European Director, A father and daughter spy team are on the run, looking for answers…And revenge.
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Able Simon, defending himself, kills the corrupt Director of The Eastern Office of the CIA. After disappearing, we meet his estranged daughter, Sintra, whose boyfriend thinks is a lawyer. When a lunch date results in finding a missing child, she figures out her father set the finding up and we learn, she's no lawyer...She's a spy like her dad. Knowing her dad has snuck into her apartment, she calls him out and they are attacked by government agents. An elderly "cleaner" spy sends they away, forcing them to take the boyfriend with them.
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JR Rodriguez This feels like a fun, commercial setup the father-daughter spy dynamic, especially with an estranged relationship, creates a strong emotional and comedic foundation. There’s a nice mix of action and character conflict there.
I also like the idea of them being forced on the run together, especially with the added complication of the boyfriend getting pulled into that world that has a lot of potential for both tension and humor.
I was wondering how you’re leaning into the tone does the comedy come more from the character dynamics, or is it more situational within the action? It feels like that balance could really define the voice of the project.
Definitely sounds like an entertaining concept.
Thank you, Abhijeet Aade! I like the idea of them attacking from different points and the comedy coming from mistakes on both sides. And the boyfriend has a few secrets...I'm thinking.
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