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KOMODO
By Nicholas P
After her best friend is killed, a young girl runs away to become a survivalist, martialist and terrorist. To get her freedom back from a yakuza boss, she must destroy him before he learns of her whereabouts.
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Nicholas P An intriguing and intense premise, Nicholas. What stands out to me is the transformation of the protagonist from a grieving young girl into someone forced to survive and fight in a dangerous world. The personal connection between her loss and her mission against the yakuza boss creates strong emotional stakes, while the crime elements add tension and suspense. Wishing you the best with the continued development of KOMODO.
Thank you Abhijeet Aade i appreciate you