Interesting concept, Nicholas P. I think your logline could be tightened up some. Something like: After her husband's friends frame her for his disappearance, a _______ (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality) young woman races against time to prove she's innocent and rescue him.
I'm not sure if "rescue him" is part of the story though. And adding an adjective for the wife would give the reader more insight into her character.
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Interesting concept, Nicholas P. I think your logline could be tightened up some. Something like: After her husband's friends frame her for his disappearance, a _______ (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality) young woman races against time to prove she's innocent and rescue him.
I'm not sure if "rescue him" is part of the story though. And adding an adjective for the wife would give the reader more insight into her character.
Rated this logline