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ROBBIE

ROBBIE
By Seth Nelson

GENRE: Animation
LOGLINE:

When a baby robin falls out of his nest, a family struggles to keep him alive.

ROBBIE

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Seth Nelson

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Rebecca Jean-Carroll

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Pattana Thaivanich

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Maurice Vaughan

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Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins

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Catherine Girard-Veilleux

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Catherine Girard-Veilleux

Okay, this is not only adorable and touching, but quite informative in such a short line. For example, we learn right away that the baby robin is a male. I love how you phrased the logline in fewer words than some of your other loglines. Plus, animation is great! Thanks for sharing.

Seth Nelson

Thanks so much. I was told by a professional to put as much information in 1 or 2 sentences. It's a 9 page read. I hope you enjoy the story.

Nathaniel Baker

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Nate Rymer

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Tasha Lewis 2

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David Pitt

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Fahd Aldajani فهد الدعجاني

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Derek C. Block

Only question I have is, is there a conflict? Does keeping the robin alive improve their lives or prevent something bad from happening (other than the robin's death of course)? What are the stakes?

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