THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
ROUGHNECK
By Robert Russo
An oilfield Roughneck must survive a dangerous job and conquer hisinner demons to discover peace and happiness.
SYNOPSIS:
Based on my life story.
Register / Log In
Rated this logline
Rated this logline
1 person likes this
too many unnecessary words and a confusing logline. Try Starting with this and go from there: An oil rig worker with PTSD
Yeah I will rework it thanks.
use emotional words and words people do not need to look up what is a roughneck? what is a dangerous job? what are his demons and why peace and happiness use other words to define things as these are boring terms
Rated this logline
Sounds like a fun new world! I agree with Kacee about some more emotional words.
Rated this logline