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HOUSE ARREST
By DL Stickler
After he loses custody of his children, a criminal justice service technician struggles to reconcile his self image with his actions and choices.
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There's nothing wrong with it, but it lacks emotional impact--Why?
What was the inciting incident, the catalyst that ignited the inner struggle?
"After something occurred, a criminal justice..."
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