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CUE BALL & LARRY
By Phil O'Brien
A Detective with psychic abilities serves, protects and takes down the cities criminals with the help of his best friend from Patrol, despite interference from his boss and an assortment of quirky partners.
SYNOPSIS:
As a result of a accident involving a high powered electric toothbrush Detective Bobby Pattell lost all his hair, got the nickname Cue Ball and developed psychic abilities.
His abilities include being able to see the future, connect and find people such as a City Councilman's kidnapped daughter and being psychically connected to his best friend Patrolman Larry Brown. Together they use their unusual skills to solve crimes and stop the bad guys despite interference from his Cue Ball's overbearing boss and an assortment of quirky partners.
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Hi Phil. I like your idea! Hmm let's see. I need a bit more info. Your logline I think needs to describe a specific problem. If they are a team then how can they get bothered by partners? Another question that arises is: if they are so in sync with each other then I would expect things go smooth so what's the issue? What are the negatives to these powers? Where is the struggle? Does he struggle to identify his thoughts from his partners? Would love to hear more and help. Greetings Marjolein