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A quiet loner must abstain from as much as a single drop of human blood passing his lips to lift the curse and be with the only woman he as ever truly loved.
SYNOPSIS:
Simon has lived a lonely existence ever since he was cursed over 20 years ago, he has spent much of this time traveling from one town to another to avoid detection. After yet another night of feasting on human flesh he knows this is not what he wants his life to be anymore.
He has met and fallen in love with with Crissy, he knows he could quite easily infect her and curse her to the same fate at his but he is not prepared to sacrifice her happiness for his own selfish gain. He knows he must abstain from human blood for 365 consecutive days in order to lift the curse that plagues him. For one night each month he has to lock himself away, naked and chained like an animal in order to achieve his goal. and be free.
His love for Crissy drives him along until one night during their love making the unthinkable happens and he once again has to up sticks and move on once again.
I have completed the 1st draft of this but it needs tidying up and some of the cliches removed. There is also a sex scene that I feel can be handled differently as it might be a little distasteful.
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