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A beautiful place for a person is causing his death. He struggles to survive.
SYNOPSIS:
Characters:
Max Brown 40, years. Tourist good looking. Good man. From Californian.
Jane Albert 32, years. Tourist beautiful Good Girl. From London.
Bus Driver 35, years. Normal man Best driver, careful.
A man 55, years, weak lean thin normal business man. From Karachi - Pakistan.
Apart from these, few other women and gentlemen are tourists.
Three families are tourists.
Synopsis:
This is the story of an Asian country, Pakistan. Kaghan is a very beautiful place in Pakistan. A tourist bus is going on Kaghan Road. There are a few Pakistanis among the tourists. There are also three Pakistani families. Max and Jane are also on the bus. Both are good friends.
The bus driver says that there was a terrible situation here some time ago. But now a lot of peace has been established. Still, any accident can happen. I am very careful about that.
A white car has been following them for some time. The driver tells all the tourists. All tourists are ready to fight this trouble.
At one point, they all get out and surround the car. In their hands are iron rods, poles. The driver has a gun. There is only one old man in the white car. He tells in fear. I am a small businessman from Karachi. I am come here after a long time for a business deal. This place is free from pollution. I came to this place and got upset. Stopped my breath. I was dying. Suddenly your bus passed near me. The black smoke of the bus entered my breath. I felt like my life is returning. I understood that this place free from pollution is my death and this black smoke of the bus is my life. I spend the whole day in the same smoke on the streets of Karachi. I am following this bus for my survival.
(The End)
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